FREEWRITE MY WEEKEND <3

On October 25,2008 throw october 26,2008 was an awsome weekend. on october 25,2008 i went to sixflags all day ! It was my first time staying ther for the night fest. it was scary and nice, but it was pack ! i could see everyone rushing to the lines beacuse it was like a 3 hours wait for them or for the scary mazes. while we were in line for those long lines under the hot sun people were sweating and i could smell their nasty armpits. But in the end it turn out all good me and my sister had fun we didnt get home until like 2 something.
October 26,2008 which was a sunday. i woke up really early i went to the cementary. the reason i went is because my cousin passed away like 2 months ago and his birthday was on October 23,2008 he was turning 19 years old. so on sunday the whole family and friends went to the cementary with us because we got a priest to go there and spend time with my cousin on his birthday. a lot of people were coming i could see that my cousin's grave was getting more full of beautiful flowers they got for him and we also took him ballons. while the priest was giving the church i could see people crying and here them blowing there noses the church finish it was good. but my cousins wanted to get things out my head so they took me to the movies and we watch the movie SAW 5 do not go and watch it it the worst movie ever .
so that was my wonderful weeked ! (+

SETTING

I'm here at my house setting down. I could see my mom helping my little brother name Angel on his homework. While I hear my sister Diana screaming at my mom trying to get her attention. My other sister who's name is Natalie brought me a cup of water and a sandwitch for I could eat them while i take a bite of my sandwitch i could taste the cheese it taste like if its old ewwww. After that I took a drink of the cold water i could feel it going down my throat. I didnt know that my sandwitch had hot sauce on it !!! >=( i could taste the flaming hot sauce and its burning my mouth ! what a day =0

Developing your Character

characters name :Gary
ccupation : mailman
age :37

There is a man name Gary. He is 37 years old , he is our mailman. He is fat and ugly not even his mailman uniforms fits him the shirt fits him like a braw for women which in a way now that i think about it he does look like one too. His pants look like short shorts that a girl would wear just that his stomach is sticking out while he has food stains. He never takes showers and he still lives with his mother.Gary is the worst mailman ever! besides him being ugly and fat he is the most harry person u had ever seen on his hair animals stay there and sleep since it keeps them warm but i ask myself how can they live with Gary kowing how bad he smells! Gary our mailman is the most DISGUSTED thing ever. Gary the big fat harry ugly mailman things that all women are after him he thinks that he is so hot that he is "BATMAN"! The only reason he things that all women are after him is that they go outside and get ther mail and also because they think that he is just an ugly mail women. Gary does the worst job ever i mean he gets our mail to our homes but the promblem is that there are food stains on them animals ants crawling on them ! poor Gary i bet his house is worst then his truck i could imagine food everywhere animals ants insects all over the house not even alive all dead! from the strong nasty smell that Gary has. I even get the chills by thinking how ugly his casa is ! poor mammas boy!
Gary suddenly saw how fat and ugly and harry he is how his life sucks for him beinf old and still with his mother ! he decided to change he satrted to work out in the backyard of his ugly smelly house aka dumpster cleaned everything up his house his truck even his mother and more important himself! he did a big change he started to do his job right he even smell good now (= everyone notice that of Gary that all the women were after him now he really felt like batman and he knew he was good looking too ! so he didnt want to go out with lady's not only did he learn how to be clean and keep his job but also who is the right girl for him he realize that girl would be someone that like him just the way he is before he even turn into BATMAN! so this is the sad happy ending of Gary! "BATMAN"